Saturday, March 3, 2012

C4K Summary

C4K#1
The student I was assign to was Alisha and she talk about taking a trip to china to see them dance in a dragon suite. I stated that I would like to visit an island and enjoy the food and scenery.

C4K#2
The second student I was assign to was Bailey,but there was no student by the name of Bailey on the site I was provided.Therefore, I commented on a student name George,and he wrote a blog "School is Hopeless". In the blog he talk about the routine of school is boring, but thanks to technology, school is more interesting.His blog was interesting and well written, and suggested he should write a book on that topic.
C4K#3
I commented on a student name Emma, because the one I was assigned to didn't have a blog. Emma talk about her trip to Florida, and also did a video of the trip. I added that I've also visited Florida and had a good time when I visited,and looking forward to visiting again.
C4K#4
I commented on the blog "should the BILL OF RIGHTS be updated". The writer stated,the bill of rights are out of date and they should be updated.The writer thinks the laws that were established are no longer needed, because situations have changed.The writer made some interesting points, however, those laws and amendments were built upon opposition,people fought for the rights that we now have, some died.I did not oppose the writer ideas, I just commented from a different point of view. That since the laws were established through opposition, that should be changed upon opposition.

1 comment:

  1. "...I was assign to was Alisha and she talk about taking a trip to china..." assigned not assign. Capitalize China.

    Two missing students. Sorry but I am glad you found substitutes.

    "...however, those laws and amendments were built upon opposition... That since the laws were established through opposition, that should be changed upon opposition." This makes no sense to me. What do you mean?

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